I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Nathan how a wonderful Kind Letter you and Joshua and Senric and you made for the soldiers that died and how did you feel when you made this and the backgronds and I think next time you could add more information.
talofa Nathan this senric and toa from your class we really like how you did a slide show about anzac but next time can you make the background one color?
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Hi it,s kaiva I like how your ANZAC work it looks impressive!theres somthing that I don,t it is the colour you put to much colour!
ReplyDeleteHi Nathan how a wonderful Kind Letter you and Joshua and Senric and you made for the soldiers that died and how did you feel when you made this and the backgronds and I think next time you could add more information.
ReplyDeletetalofa Nathan this senric and toa from your class we really like how you did a slide show about anzac but next time can you make the background one color?
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