I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Great job on you and Vai. I like how you two collaborated with each other and worked on a presentation about Dreams Can Come True. One thing that I liked about yours was how you said in the beginning "Listen carefully". You and Vai have done an amazing job. What is your dream job and how do you think you can accomplish it to get to your dream job? Take Care. -Shriya Rm10
Fabulous chain of thoughts - lovely collaborative effort to you and Vai. Great to see you both believing in own abilities and that's where it all starts, within yourselves. All the best and yes, never give up!
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Talofa lava Nathaniel,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on you and Vai. I like how you two collaborated with each other and worked on a presentation about Dreams Can Come True. One thing that I liked about yours was how you said in the beginning "Listen carefully". You and Vai have done an amazing job. What is your dream job and how do you think you can accomplish it to get to your dream job? Take Care.
-Shriya Rm10
Fabulous chain of thoughts - lovely collaborative effort to you and Vai. Great to see you both believing in own abilities and that's where it all starts, within yourselves. All the best and yes, never give up!
ReplyDeleteso you did a collab? bts did a collab with a women, a famous one, you need a wome- jk, can i have auto graph because you did a collaboration so you must be famous so can I have 99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999$
ReplyDeleteHey Nathaniel,
ReplyDeleteGreat work This shows how much you care about learning keep up the great work.
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