I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Nathan,Good job on this writing I don't think you remember me from last year "Vaa" But good on you for writing it and, There are some mistakes in t like the "i" is meant to be the "I" but again well done...
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
This is really interesting maybe next time you can use a smaller template.
ReplyDeleteHi Nathan,Good job on this writing I don't think you remember me from last year "Vaa" But good on you for writing it and, There are some mistakes in t like the "i" is meant to be the "I" but again well done...
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DeleteVAA! I REMEmBER YOU!
DeleteCan I have your account jk, I really liked what you told us about you... but! There is heaps of mistakes! And great job...
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