I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Nathaniel, this is Nese, Ilaisaane and Emora from your school. We like all the facts you put on NZ. Maybe next time you could reference your work (link the site you got the information from).
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hello Nathaniel, this is Nese, Ilaisaane and Emora from your school. We like all the facts you put on NZ. Maybe next time you could reference your work (link the site you got the information from).
ReplyDeleteTalofa Lava Nathan I really like your work and your images👍 it really creative of you that you put lots of images
ReplyDeleteTalofa Lava Nathan I like your work♥❤ and how you are doing I really like💕 where you put your images.
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