I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hey Nathaniel it's Bella from Paroa School. I really like this blog post and how it shows us who Richie McCaw is and what he does. DO you play rugby? If you do then what team do you play for? Maybe next time to be BTB (Better Than Before) you could add a caption. Haere Ra. Bella.
Nice job on doing your facts based on Richie McCaw.I like how you added an ad of Richie McCaw. Maybe next time you could tell everyone what you are doing and add a caption also maybe you could add capital letters for Richie McCaw. Keep up the good work!
Hi Nathaniel, I like how you gave me more information on Richie McCaw I learned some new facts. My favourite part was reading all the new facts about Richie McCaw. Maybe next time you could write what was your favourite part on making this slide. From Kyvana at Ahipara School.
Hi Nathaniel. I like how you gave me a lot of info about Richie Mccaw. My favourite part was learning heaps of new facts about Richie Mccaw. From kavelle at Ahipara school
Hi Nathaniel, Ngairon here from Ahipara school. I like your your post about facts of Richie McCaw. Maybe next time you could add the facts into different columns like fact 1 fact 2. Ka pai
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Nathaniel it's Bella from Paroa School.
ReplyDeleteI really like this blog post and how it shows us who Richie McCaw is and what he does. DO you play rugby? If you do then what team do you play for? Maybe next time to be BTB (Better Than Before) you could add a caption.
Haere Ra.
Bella.
Malo e lelei Nathaniel,
ReplyDeleteIt's me Shriya from your class Rm11,
Nice job on doing your facts based on Richie McCaw.I like how you added an ad of Richie McCaw. Maybe next time you could tell everyone what you are doing and add a caption also maybe you could add capital letters for Richie McCaw. Keep up the good work!
Kia Ora Nathaniel,
ReplyDeleteI really like your Richie Mcaw Facts and next time could you add more facts.
How long did it take you?
Kia Ora Nathaniel,
ReplyDeleteI really like your background and your photo and stay safe,
Hi Nathaniel,
ReplyDeleteI like how you gave me more information on Richie McCaw I learned some new facts.
My favourite part was reading all the new facts about Richie McCaw.
Maybe next time you could write what was your favourite part on making this slide.
From Kyvana at Ahipara School.
Hi Nathaniel. I like how you gave me a lot of info about Richie Mccaw. My favourite part was learning heaps of new facts about Richie Mccaw. From kavelle at Ahipara school
ReplyDeleteHi Nathaniel, Ngairon here from Ahipara school. I like your your post about facts of Richie McCaw. Maybe next time you could add the facts into different columns like fact 1 fact 2. Ka pai
ReplyDeleteHi Nathaniel i'm Carlos from paroa school this blog is amazing i liked how put a lot of facts in to this.
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NOICE
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