I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Nathaniel it's Bella, I really liked this and how it explained what you want to achieve and stuff. It's also cool how you told us where you are from. Maybe next time to be BTB (Better Than Before) you could add more full stops and capital letters but otherwise it's really good. Byyeeeee
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Nathaniel it's Bella, I really liked this and how it explained what you want to achieve and stuff. It's also cool how you told us where you are from. Maybe next time to be BTB (Better Than Before) you could add more full stops and capital letters but otherwise it's really good. Byyeeeee
ReplyDeleteHi Nathaniel,my name is Dakota from ahipara school but the one thing you need to work on your blog is your photo,you need to make it wider.
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